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If only, darling,
You were just an inch taller.
Maybe that smile a little bit smaller.

If only, honey,
You were just a year older.
A wild party animal, perhaps a smoker

Because right now, dear,
It’s purely impossible.
I can’t do it, hun, it's just not agreeable.

I can’t fall in love with you.

You’re making it hard-
Goodness, you are-
But I shouldn’t
Even care,
It shouldn’t have gone this far.

The truth is, dearest, your height is ideal,
And that smile you have hardly seems real.

Though, yes, you’re becoming much more than
Before,
I don’t want you smoking,
A nasty habit for sure.

And until all this is finally solved,
My love will stay buried,
Though
Always,
Always
Involved.
©2006-2009 ~HopelessCase
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Author's Comments

wheeee my emotions about this stuff usually comes out in poetry.

weird huh?

there is some rhyming though! *proud* tell me what you think, okie? <3

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sorry i haven't commented on this sooner, but i didn't really know what to say.
It's a very touching poem, and... i don't really know how to describe it. I like it very much.
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:iconhopelesscase:
oh yay! :D i'm really glad you liked it!!

bah silly emotions always come out in poems for me haha

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Just one silly, hopeless case of a romantic with no romance in sight.
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Wow. I consider myself almost the anti-romantic with a touch of cynicism, but it actually captured how I feel currently. Okay, so sometimes a hopeless romantic. I really like it.
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ooooh, I'm honored! when I've touched an anti-romantic, I know I must be doing something right.

:) thank you for the comment. they are always greatly appreciated!

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Just one silly, hopeless case of a romantic with no romance in sight.

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